I was intrigued by today’s NaPoWriMo prompt and it’s link, but I was immediately struck by the reference to the term greenout in respect of it being the feeling of witnessing plant life after a long time surrounded by snow.
When I was in Primary School I remember being amazed to learn that an icy wilderness, the Tundra, could be described as a desert. I thought all deserts had to be hot, dry and sandy.
This bought me to todays offering where I was once a habitual visitor to football matches, only to find that when I moved to a lovely island that it would be years before I had the chance to return to watch a match. My own desert – a life without going to big venues.
When I did return, the most striking thing of the entire experience was the dazzling splendour of the pitch itself, incredibly green and radiant. Other people have also mentioned the same feeling in the same situation. So there you have it, my own desert, and my own greenout.
Overall, I’m not super happy with the poem, I’ve had to craft it quickly to meet todays deadline, but I will probably return to revise during the month.
Well I Never!
My self-induced isolation
Had hit harder than I knew
When 5 years hence I did return
From gold sand and waters blue
Once again through the turnstile
Past the bustling concourse hoards
I made my way up every step
As the light I moved towards
They say appreciating greenout
Needs long times spent in the snow
But a floodlight pitch after several years
Set my eyesight aglow
Ralph 02/4/2022
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